Love Poem...

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I came home to find another poem Koa wrote on paper he takes out of my printer on my computer desk. He used to take paper and draw pictures all the time. He really honed his artistic skills. Now he is into writing poetry. Here is his poem...

I am gonna give my heart to someone...
Who I really love...
But I'm scared to give her my heart...
Because it looks bad...
So goodbye girl...
Hello cool...
Just don't be...
A bit of a fool...

I think I need to start listening to my son. He sounds more advanced in the area of love than me. I don't know where this kid is coming up with this stuff. But I am incredibly proud of him...

Comments

Anonymous said…
That is a really good poem Koa did, even besides the message, the form is good...you could make it into a song...I especially like "goodbye girl...hello cool" hehe..tell him he did good from us out here too!
December 9, 2008 at 5:38 AM
Ka`iana said…
Mahalo! I will let him know others praise his poetry. Not just doting dad. He may clobber me if he finds out I posted his love poem for the whole world to see but I don't think he will get too mad. I still don't know where he picks this stuff up because I certainly haven't begun to work with him. Yet...
December 9, 2008 at 8:32 PM
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